This is posted after the final draft of the technical report has been submitted.
The following are areas of the technical report that i felt could be improved.
The following are areas of the technical report that i felt could be improved.
Executive summary
The report aims to highlight the importance of
having an emergency alert device in the homes of Singaporean elderly citizens,
and the limitations and risks of not having them. The report will explore
different types of alert systems that are already in the market, and suggest
one to be implemented, namely iHelp Adult GPS Tracker Device. The
selection is made through careful considerations based on their functions and
features.
Report will also suggest way to run trials with the
selected medical emergency system, to test its effectiveness and reliability. Additionally,
the report will continue to explain the rationale of the implementation of the
model and describe how it will be implemented.
Research was conducted to ensure that the selection
of the emergency alert system is comprehensive, and to make sure that the
proposal is feasible and beneficial. Primary research include interview with
elderly, to have a clearer understanding of the prominent problems faced by
them, and to gather constructive input to decide on the most vital features
that an emergency alert system should possess.
Purpose statement
The purpose of this proposal is to describe the
different types of emergency alert systems in the market and promote the optimal
system. The selected alert system will be recommended to Ministry of Social and
Family Development, and propose a trial to test the feasibility of the selected
product. Thus, the proposal is submitted in hopes of it being sold or
distributed to elderly or their family in need.
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